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Monday, June 16, 2014

Saving Some Time - Keeping Momentum


     You're on a roll with a good story.  As you write, the name of a particular town escapes you.
You stop writing, go online, and look up the area where your story takes place in hopes of coming across the  town you can't remember. OR...
     You're writing a series and working on Book Two. You can't remember the name of the friend of your main character's sister. So you go into your saved files and retrieve the manuscript for Book One and attempt to search for the friend's name by looking up every reference to 'friend' since the name has been forgotten. This could take minutes or it can take an hour.
     Sometimes when we interrupt the flow of the story with research, we lose the momentum.  It's better to jot down what you need to look up on a piece of paper and tape it to your monitor or in a place you'll be sure to see it later on.  Then keep writing and simply type..............for the forgotten name of the person or town.
     In my case it was the name of a horse in my Book One Amish novel that I needed to carry over into Book Two. I couldn't use the 'find' feature in WORD, because, as in the example above, about the sister's friend, I forgot the name!
    Instead, I typed..................to indicate where the name of the horse should be, made a note of what page this was on, and kept writing. Later on, when writing time is over, I can look up the horse's name.  Or perhaps the next day, but certainly before submission. And especially if you are an independently published author and don't belong to a critique group.
    I came across an Amish series novel recently where in Book Two, the author used a different female name for what was supposed to be the same character from Book One. They both began with a 'D' but the name had been changed. Deborah became Dina. At first I thought it was another girl. The point is, to remember to go back and make the changes and/or fill in the blanks you reserved for research at a later time. Otherwise you'll have many baffled readers. In the meantime, enjoy the momentum and save the blank spaces for later.
   Note to self: Page 18 - hero's town needed. Simple enough.

  

Thursday, June 12, 2014

Some Great Quotes About Writing-

     Sometimes it's encouraging and satisfying to read the thoughts and advice of other writers. I am sure many of us can relate to a few (perhaps all) of the following quotes taken from an online article by Zachary Petit , an award-winning journalist, the senior managing editor of Writer’s Digest Magazine.
 
 “Just write every day of your life. Read intensely. Then see what happens. Most of my friends who are put on that diet have very pleasant careers.”
—Ray Bradbury, WD

 “Write. Rewrite. When not writing or rewriting, read. I know of no shortcuts.”
—Larry L. King, WD

 “We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master.”
—Ernest Hemingway


 “I don’t care if a reader hates one of my stories, just as long as he finishes the book.”
—Roald Dahl, WD

 “The road to hell is paved with adverbs.”
—Stephen King


 “The greatest part of a writer’s time is spent in reading, in order to write; a man will turn over half a library to make one book.”
—Samuel Johnson

 “If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it. Or, if proper usage gets in the way, it may have to go. I can’t allow what we learned in English composition to disrupt the sound and rhythm of the narrative.”
—Elmore Leonard


 “I would advise anyone who aspires to a writing career that before developing his talent he would be wise to develop a thick hide.”
—Harper Lee, WD
 
 “Keep a small can of WD-40 on your desk—away from any open flames—to remind yourself that if you don’t write daily, you will get rusty.”
—George Singleton                                            



“The difference between the almost right word and the right word is … the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning.”
—Mark Twain

 “Plot is people. Human emotions and desires founded on the realities of life, working at cross purposes, getting hotter and fiercer as they strike against each other until finally there’s an explosion—that’s Plot.”
—Leigh Brackett, WD

Thursday, May 29, 2014

Internet Slang/Lingo-

   

   As writers, it's beneficial to know the slang lingo used on FB, Twitter, in e-mails, and phone texts. We never can tell when we'll need to incorporate them into our stories. Besides, it's baffling when we have no clue as to what someone is telling us in an e-mail or on FB.  Nowadays, it might be likened to a writer not knowing how to spell a simple word and feeling red-faced for his or her ignorance.

    It doesn't matter if we are 20 or 90 years old. Times have changed, and even if we don't hasten to use such abbreviated slang forms of words, at least we can understand them, because they WILL come our way.  Here's a humorous example:
   We were changing over from dial-up service to fast speed Internet and some other changes involving our cell phones. The customer service woman asked my husband, "Do you still want POTS?"  My husband said, "What is POTS?"  She said, "Plain Old Telephone Service."  Duh?
    If it's coming up in phone conversations too...it's here big time.
    Chances are, that those who have teens at home might already know a great deal of the lingo.While others (such as myself) only knew the most common ones. Let alone the expressions used on Twitter.  That's for a whole other post.
    So, it wasn't a great surprise when I saw books (dictionaries too) on Amazon.com for Internet slang lingo. (Too bad I didn't think of it!)  Here is one that is reasonably priced for Kindle via Amazon.com

Understanding Internet Slang by Jon Appleseed (Jun 30, 2013)

If you want to see a lot more for free, go to: http://www.internetslang.com/list.asp?i=G

In the meantime, here are twenty five, with many that are supposedly trending right now...
BBL        -   Be Back Later
BTW       -   By The Way
CMT      -    Count Me In
DDG       -    Drop Dead Gorgeous
G2G        -    Got To Go
IDK         -    I Don't Know
ILY          -    I Love You
L8R         -    Later
LHK        -    Love, Hugs, and Kisses
LYL         -    Love You Lots
M2           -    Me Too
M&D       -   Mum and Dad
NBD        -    No Big Deal
OIC         -    Oh, I See
O&O       -    Over and Out
ROTFL    -   Rolling On The Floor Laughing
TTYL       -   Talk To You Later
TIA          -    Thanks In Advance
VBD        -    Very Big Deal
WAYD?    -   What Are You Doing?
WGAF     -    Who Gives a (Bleep) 
WTG        -   Way To Go
YT?          -    You There?
YW          -     You're Welcome
ZA           -     Pizza     

   Note: When I was a teenager, my friends and I had our own abbreviations and made-up words we'd write in our 'snail mail' and notes, in case others (mainly our parents) would read them. We were very creative at times too. For example, instead of writing, I'll see you at Newkirk Avenue. We might have written, I'll see Kirk at the new avenue.  And 'Haley'sMO' (a liquid antacid at the time) meant: Make Out. So, a note might have said something like, Mike asked if I wanted some Haley's MO, but I told him no. LOL!
      K. G2GC ( Okay. Got to go cook.)  L8R-

Monday, May 26, 2014

Summertime and Writing Discipline

   Today is the 'unofficial' start of summer. Some of us visited a beach for the first time this year, had our kick-off barbecue of the season, maybe took a bike ride or jog in the park, all the while looking ahead to sunnier warmer days.

    The lure to spend more time outdoors after a long snowy winter might cause an interruption in our writing, but it doesn't have to be that way if we juggle around our writing schedules a bit.

    For example, if during cold winter days, we wrote early in the morning, and now that the weather is warmer, we want to use that time for an outdoor walk instead of on a treadmill later on, then we simply switch the writing time with what would have been the treadmill time.
   Changing over to a laptop for writing is another good idea during the summer months.  We can then write on the beach, our deck, or by the pool. This way, there won't be any compromising good weather for writing or vice versa.
    If children are living at home, once summer vacation begins, we want to participate with them in certain activities...take them to the beach, to a friend's pool, go to a theme park, the zoo, etc. It's important to be mindful of our need for fun and some vacation time with family and friends and still remain dedicated to our craft.
   One way is to take a short break now and again and have children write in a journal about their summer vacation...their favorite parts of the day...what they like about summer, etc. And we can do the very same thing in our own journal. Some of our vacation/family/friends experiences can later be used in one of our stories. The best part is, that while the children write, we can write.    








   Perhaps we can write earlier while having breakfast, before the rest of the family wakes.
  
  If you have a backyard or a deck, create a small writing area there. A bench, a  small table and chair under an umbrella, or on our porch is perfect. If using an umbrella, some netting over it (found at most home goods stores or online) can enhance the writing time with the absence of nipping bugs.
   I once read that writers have the wonderful advantage of being able to do their job anywhere...office, beach, train, hotel room, in a green pasture under blue sky and fluffy white clouds...you get the picture.  Hmmm.  Now that I reflect on it, we are indeed fortunate to be able to take our craft wherever we go, especially with today's great compact technology.
    Sitting in an Adirondack chair with my laptop and a backdrop of mountains. Not bad.  Not bad at all. Enjoy!
                                                           

Monday, April 21, 2014

Independent Publishing?

    When we've been writing for long years with lots of hard work put in, we want to get published, like, yesterday!  Never mind waiting months for a publisher to get back to us, most especially if  the response is: "Good work, but no thanks."  Ack!  Where's the sledge hammer to hack the computer to pieces?
    Because of such rejections, some of us might venture into independent/self-publishing. I have mixed feeling about that. Having already self-published a self-help book, I know the pros and cons of my own experience. However, today there are easier avenues than becoming your own one-man (woman) publisher like I did.
    Now, we have that giant of book sellers, Amazon, offering a dream-come-true opportunity for many authors...Amazon's Independent Publishing services, where you can publish to Kindle, to print, to audio, or all three.
    I haven't personally looked into the costs or the details, but I see a number of authors out there selling their independently pubbed books on Amazon.com and via Facebook and their blogs. I am happy for those authors who are finally able to see their work in print and having others read it. However...yes, here it comes...with such publishing comes a few issues that most traditional publishing routes will not tolerate. Lets start with...Errors. 
    Sure, nearly every novel I have read had at least one spelling error, maybe a missing word or an extra preposition. Mostly Kindle versions. Depending on the error, I try to attribute them to the probability of formatting or some such techno issue. But, I don't really know for certain if that's the case. (No pun intended.)  But in the print versions, more than 'two' errors or so, would not likely be tolerated by, ONE: The agent representing the author...and, TWO: The editors working to put the book into print for their publisher. Let's face it, errors make a publisher look bad. A reader might say: "How could such a big publishing house have allowed so many errors to slip through?"  Usually...they don't.
   So, what's the big deal about a few errors if the story is really good?  Well, apparently, many readers don't like them. A good number of reader reviews state that they will not purchase books again from a specific author due to those errors.  This means that even if that author were to later on go the traditional route, she or he has already diminished their sales if using the same author name as for the error laden work.
   For example, a one star review on Amazon.com, can prevent an author from attaining a four or five star overall review. Many readers make purchases based on book reviews.
   In the urgency of wanting to be published, some authors might fall into the careless mode, especially a first-timer. I have done that with my self-pubbed book. Fortunately, the information in the book is more valuable to those in need of such info, than my errors of  too-long paragraphs and unnecessary repetition. The five star Amazon overall review status attests to that. Had it been a novel, I doubt those flaws would have been so readily overlooked. And had I gone the traditional route, an editor would not have allowed those long paragraphs to get passed her or his desk.
     Now, lets look at the strength of the story.  Is it just a good story to the author for personal or sentimental reasons? Is the plot feasible?  Is it for a particular audience, such as teens or females, yet bearing a title and description deflecting from that fact?  Unlike an agent or editor, independent publishing doesn't have that same guidance to help us get rid of those flies in the ointment. But again, the reader reviews will clearly point them out. That is not the platform where we want such overlooked issues to be highlighted. 
     Bearing this in mind, it seems that an important benefit for those going the self-pubbed route, is to join a writing critique group so that others can help spot errors and weak story lines. It's also a means of learning about various writing rules, such as POV (character point of view) and head hopping, (jumping from one character to the other in the same scene) as well as grammatical errors, such as dangling phrases and too many tag lines, and even repetition issues...the same word used too much or restating the obvious. When we get attached to a story we tend to run on and on at times. A critique partner will point out such tendencies.
   We can't rely on our spell checker too much, either.  For instance, if we have a typo for 'too' being 'to' or even 'toe,' the spell checker will not pick that up because none of the words are misspelled.  And so, our sentence of, "I want to come along toe," will go through the spell checker without any red underline. This is one of many instances where the critique group comes in.
     Having our work checked by other writers is not only a good idea for authors going the independent publishing route, but also for those going the traditional route. Even more so, when it comes to our proposals and queries.
     If we want our work to be taken seriously at the onset, it has to read that way. After all, we are looking for a job; a writing job with an agent to represent us and a publisher to publish us. We want them to work with us to get our book out there in readership land.  It's collaborative teamwork.
    While errors can't be avoided - we are human, after all - they can be fixed before reaching readers. With the help of a writing critique group, writing courses, and our own resolve to avoid carelessness and to double check our work, we'll come up with a clean professional end result. Yes, it requires a tough spirit to take even the good and helpful criticisms, and a swallow of pride to learn that sometimes we can be grammatical dummies and come up with a really bad story. But it's all part of the process of fine tuning our writing abilities into something beautiful. Much like the old adage of the potter molding and forming a lump of clay into a perfect useful vessel.
       For those who are reading this who have gone the independent route, this is not in any way a bashing of such a choice. Just an observation of some of the particular independently published books I've read that had noticeable errors, repetition issues, and weak story plots. Not necessarily all in the one book.
     Of course, this isn't the case for the majority of independently pubbed books I've read, but even the few that warranted my attention to those negative issues, have gotten similar attention for the very same reasons by other readers, resulting in some bad reviews. I consider that a lesson for myself, and something worth blogging about.
     Some advocate that we writers NOT read our one-star reviews (for obvious reasons.) But maybe those reviews can act as another sort of critique group, all serving to strengthen our craft.
    
     
   

Sunday, March 30, 2014

Some Humor During the Rejections-

Hey, none of us like to receive the dreaded e-mails from our agent or a publisher telling us we have yet again been turned down. But we have two choices: keep on writing and take a humorous stance about it...or brood, stop writing, and give up.
Numerous famous authors have received rejections and kept at it.  But to keep at, it helps to lighten up.  Here are a few snippets that might give us a boost in that direction...







Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Newest Article on Amish Novels-

http://www.beyondprose.com/index.php/the-popularity-of-amish-romance-novels-574182/